My Shy Star

in #poetry9 years ago (edited)



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One star


Upon the hill

Is enough to make

My heart go still


As it often does

When I see

Your shy look

Glance down at me


Lovely now

You've always been,

Distant

From the ways of men


But weave such magic

Out of grace

And cast dark spells

By your face


Lovely then

And lovely still,

Glimmering

Star upon the hill



© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved



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Beautiful - are you such a romantic in real life also or just in poems? :) Love your work

ha ha, I'm the same in real life. I have an infinite capacity to enhance reality :)

Then you are blessed

#life
Jack Kerouac : Maybe that’s what life is… a wink of the eye and winking stars.

I love that - very appropriate quote, @ainal

Resteemed, for My Shy Star :)

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Good Poem Its Heartness for me.

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Cool. Good to see someone else that likes to write poetry that rhymes. I see so much, that is good, but, for me, it sounds better when it rhymes. That's how I do my poetry anyway. You, and everyone else, are welcome to check mine out anytime.

Thanks for another lovely tribute to love.

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Simply beautiful. Warms the heart and soul. :)

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