Monsters in Shadows

in #poetry8 years ago (edited)



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This pale sky
With peach clouds
Looks summery
But white roofs
And snowy roads
Say another thing


The sun lights the brick
Of the house
Across the street
And blue shadows fall
Between it and me

It’s early afternoon
and soon will grow dark
The path through the woods
Shadowed by exclamation marks

At night it’s coyotes
And a hunting moon
But in late afternoon
It’s men in hoods

Dark figures trudging
Through well packed snow
And women oblivious
Walking alone

They say there are monsters
In the woods
That prowl and hunt
Until the dawn

But I know better
Than to trust old myths,
The monsters I know
Live in town



© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved



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An eerie word this evening you share. Reminds me of M Night Shyamalan actually. You may not like his work, but I meant it at as a compliment, lol.

thanks, lydon- actually love his work - close to cinematographic poetry :)

I am really so passionate about poetry @johnjgeddes and I want us to be one of the leading tags on steemit. what do you think should be done to improve it?

enjoying poetry is like licking honey from a slate - if the honey is bad, who wants it?

The monsters I know congregate in legislative chambers.

😄😇😄

@creatr

ha ha, I might have guessed

I'm big fan of your poetry . It's love and nature full. Great work @johnjgeddes.
Love it

Namaste

beautiful rhymes are very riveting, i like it
have a great activity @johnjgeddes

greeting by @danielus

Great post. Have a good night

your poem is so cool, it will motivate me to make poetry like you

your welcome, if you have many times, you can visit my blog, i need your support and upvote from you

What a truly definition of 'Nature'.

nice work brother. Upvoted.

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