First Loss

in #poetry9 years ago (edited)





Green and pearl-covered


wet with dew...


A flower opening


tender the morning

Of sun-hung sky,


Brimming the life

In the veins.


Yet how easily

It bleeds and flows;


Tears in eyes

That once smiled

at her face


And now weep

At her passing.



© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved


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Beautiful poem @johnjgeddes

Beautiful poem and awesome painting!

You are welcome. :-)

So heartfelt and sad. Beautiful writing :)

Another exquisite poem, @johnjgeddes!

Thanks, Ceci

a beautiful tribute to your mom, @johnjgeddes.....simply pure and beautiful. :)

Thanks ...you know

Sense of Loss!

I love your imageries

Beautiful lines !
Touching poem my friend !

You are welcome !

Beautiful painting😘

Love this! Beautiful painting :')

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