Denouement With No Resolution

in #poetry8 years ago (edited)



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There’s music softly playing
A piano tinkling
The rush of wind and rain
And heat from flames
Crackling in the grate


The music ends.
I would rewind the tape
But for the law of beginnings and ends—
Nothing can be repeated
Only replaced

And that’s how we’ll end our days.

The rain has stopped
And I peer through the window
At the Moon rising through the gray haze

Somewhere in the darkness you sleep
Impossibly distant
Beyond the glistening trees

Somewhere my replacement
Despairs of nights
Of the torment of this loneliness

There will be other storms
But no eternal returns—
That's decided

But after an interval
Without reprise
Life will go on

With nothing resolved by clearing skies



© 2018, John J Geddes. All rights reserved



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Ultimately that is what we yearn for ... the feeling of a clear sky. But it true nothing can be repeated, only replaced and so we are wise to love the fair vista. A beautifully penned and deeply meaningful write.

thanks, Pryde - 'love the fair vista' - love that line :)

Great words in just one writing! Bravo!

WoW, great post thank you for sharing with us

There are two aspects to my finding that you have published a new poem:

  1. I never have to wonder whether I should open the post to read it.
  2. Because the poems are so good, I feel that anything I say will only sound trite - and you do not deserve trite.

sigh...

thanks, Arthur :)

Excellent poem friend, transmits a feeling that makes you feel what you tell in your verses, I liked a lot, I also write a little, you could stop and read one of my works: https://steemit.com/castellano/@joseroa29/para-ella-prometo-que-por-su-amor-todo-hare-poema, It's a publication more than 7 days ago, but I think it deserves more people to read it..

Beautiful poem.. Really heart touching poem.

Like a real piano melody, crafted by words.

Nice poem and beautiful picture

Thanks 🙏🏼 for this beautiful artwork (great colors!) and poetry!

Have a great day

Fantastic poem! I've been getting into poems a bit more recently. They really are unique and a great read if the words hit correctly.

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