A Pretext for Meeting

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)



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If nothing else,
Rain is persistent,
Insistent


It smokes
In chimneys
And darkens the bricks

Shines on slate roofs
And beads
The leaded glass.

It pervades everything
with mystery
and gloom

Draws me to the window
In a darkened room,
Searching for you

But where?
In the past
Or present

Or the swirling haze
Of mist
And drizzly days?

Now without boundaries
Or any clear lines
to separate your dreams from mine

We could even meet
In another time,

Indifferent
To days and seasons...

With only a downpour
To provide a reason.



© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved



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Nice one, I love the rain, nice way to describe it too. @johnjgeddes

beautiful! i love the rain..

Rain washes away all the painful stains..
replenishing again our brightest day
with the saturated power of each drop
makes you feel like climbing a mountain top
once the pain is released, again you can feel the peace
take a deep breath and let it go.. it will rain again before you know.
~ <3 ~

very nice, Nikki :)

Thank you! ☺️❤️

Your end rhyme in each stanza is amazing. The first stanza is thrilling i had to read it aloud to get the rhythm.

This is beautiful sir.

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Beautiful. I could never write such a beautiful poem but I have always appreciated the rhythm of it. Thanks.

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