STEEMIT TO ACHIEVE IT - POETRY

Here is my first poetry post, I used Steemit as an inspiration to create this poem.
Hope you will like it.
It is composed of 6 quatrains with 4 lines each and composed of 12 syllables each lines.

Ohana*, our world is changing very fast
Up to the point that we cannot bring back the past
and we know our life on earth will never last
But still love the people coz they're so vast

Technology is bringing us to next level
But people who don't understand try to rebel
Relax my friend, you just need to do something new
this is not the end, it will not change the whole you

See, Facebook can now offer you a tons of friends
and Youtube can give you movies that has no ends
Open your eyes, social media is everywhere
Open your heart, steemit is now til forever

Have steemit account, here we are you can count
Friends that you cannot bribe with any amount
Achieve your wonderful dream with your support team
and surround yourself with many people like Tim**

As a beginner you just need to learn a lot
Wisdom, Idea the best thing that you can knot
Do not hesitate to ask for any favor
Helping a beginner is life's greater flavor

My family, you want to pursue it, steemit
My friend, If you want to achieve it, steemit
My folks, if you want to receive it, steemit
My faith said, I should steemit to achieve it

*Ohana - means family
**Tim - is a very loving person who always brings out the best in you
(https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Tim)

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