"'Suddenly a beautiful face burst out from under the water's edge accompanied by a soft soprano giggle.
It was Anne.""
Your Writing posture is AMAZING.I liked this line.
Well I don't think things have changed that much. When I was a kid at camp we had sack races all the time. We would get into a potato sack and there be like a carnival or some festivities and we just jumped on the thing down the road. We'd put eggs on spoons and run with them, we'd play capture the flag. You know, camp stuff. I'm pretty sure it's what all kids do at camp.
Of course, we didn't have cell phones back then or technology like today.
I don't think we have that kind of camp here. Going to summer camp isn't something most kids do. I do remember egg and spoon races, and three legged races, sometimes as a kid. But we are talking 50 years ago now!
Beautiful story, very interesting, Maybe this story we can make as material when we try to sleep our child. I really like. thanks for sharing @jeezzle.
Moving along really well, please keep it going!
Thank you. I think this will be one of my longer stories.
Most excellent!
"'Suddenly a beautiful face burst out from under the water's edge accompanied by a soft soprano giggle.
It was Anne.""
Your Writing posture is AMAZING.I liked this line.
Thank you very much.
Adolescent boys usually find sack races fun? Really? I obviously don't understand adolescent boys at all!
Who doesn't love a sack race?
When you put it that way... I guess it just seems a very old fashioned kind of fun. Or is the story set back in time a bit and I missed that?
Well I don't think things have changed that much. When I was a kid at camp we had sack races all the time. We would get into a potato sack and there be like a carnival or some festivities and we just jumped on the thing down the road. We'd put eggs on spoons and run with them, we'd play capture the flag. You know, camp stuff. I'm pretty sure it's what all kids do at camp.
Of course, we didn't have cell phones back then or technology like today.
I don't think we have that kind of camp here. Going to summer camp isn't something most kids do. I do remember egg and spoon races, and three legged races, sometimes as a kid. But we are talking 50 years ago now!
And girls. Annie has them eating out of her hand.
THAT part of it I can understand!
I love your way in story teeling writing, very isnpiring me on continue to writing any fiction story for the next, greeting :)
Much appreciated.
my pleasure @jeezzle.
Beautiful story, very interesting, Maybe this story we can make as material when we try to sleep our child. I really like. thanks for sharing @jeezzle.
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