BREAK the FRAME...

in #poetry8 years ago (edited)

BREAK the FRAME

......

Give a little bit,
and then a little bit more,
of you, your-self and your soul.
emptier every moment,
as the pieces dissipate.

A hopeless grasp,
with knees hitting ground,
and hands grabbing sand!

Eyes meet sky,
the pain paints it black.
Desperation kicks in...
pain owns the action.

Momentary fuel and fury,
met with remorse and regret,
and then... nothing.

Dust settles,
water washes,
and time heals.

Break the frame and
Keep on walking.

......

Until next time...

Much Love from Cape Town, South Africa xxx

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Interesting.

Thank you... I think... haha :)

amazing, meaningful words, wonderful image.

Thanks for great story..i appreciate this life..best of luck...

awesome it seems you are quite a great poet,
squize out that juice love .
keep up the great work.

Awesome this poetry, i like this writing.... resteemit

Usually a frame is an object that keeps an object within certain boundaries.

We should all go ahead and break the frames in our lives so as to cover new grounds.

Nice poem @jaynie, I hope to learn to write unique poems like yours someday

Carefully selected words. Nice words my friend.

Wonderful this poetry, i appreciate this story. keep it up dear...

I am horrible with poetry and not entirely sure how I even passed it on school, I have never really been able to get the meaning behind words, I'm to straight forward of a person. But, these words resonates with me: "Give a little bit, and then a little bit more". I'm all for pushing the limits, go above and beyond!

Having got stamina you can keep on being in frame but if you think twice you’ll come to realize you are not doomed to stay forever in that way round like a blind

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