Steemit open mic week 68 - Original Song in spanish "Do you feel what I feel"By Jared Khámanah

in #openmic6 years ago (edited)

I have encouraged myself to upload a song that I wrote inspired by a girl who apparently had a supernatural power in bed, she inspired me too much. And I wanted to reflect what I felt that night in this song. Without a doubt it's one of the best songs I've written, I'll put the song in hidden mode on youtube so that only the users of steemit can hear it, it's a very personal lyrics. But I was inclined to share it in this week's 68th open mic. I wish the participants good luck and hope they enjoy my song.
I thank @luzcypher and @pfunk and all the members of open mic for this great project do not know the great help that is for people like me who are in somewhat complicated situations in different countries facing problems like Venezuela, the music is really wonderful and thanks to this project many people get to know each other and we are rewarded in a very good way.
I want to thank @krystle for their beautiful description of the participation I had with my friend @chryzed in week 67, I really appreciate the effort they make every week to keep open mic running.
I will leave the lyrics in Spanish and English.

Lyrics ↓

(English)
Shadows in my bedroom and a cry of faith.
You wore my clothes and the body too.
You brought out demons full of pleasure.
You dance like a goddess and today I'm Lucifer.
Fire in my memory one, two and three.
Failed attempts, lost again.
Do you feel what I feel? I don't want to live.
Out of your kisses for a while I died.
Fire in my memory one, two and three.
Failed attempts, lost again.
Do you feel what I feel? I don't want to live.
Out of your kisses for a while I died.
Do you feel what I feel? I think I'm here.
Away in your curved lines I missed it.

(Spanish) ↓
Sombras en mi alcoba y un grito de fe.
Usaste mi ropa y el cuerpo también.
Sacaste demonios llenos de placer.
Danzas como diosa y hoy soy lucifer.
Fuego en mi memoria uno, dos y tres.
Intentos fallidos, volví a perder.
Sientes lo que siento? no quiero vivir.
Fuera de tus besos un tiempo mori.
Fuego en mi memoria uno, dos y tres.
Intentos fallidos, volví a perder.
Sientes lo que siento? no quiero vivir.
Fuera de tus besos un tiempo mori.
Sientes lo que siento? creo que estoy aqui.
Lejos en tus lineas curvas me perdí.

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This is an awesome, song, performance, and entry, man! Thanks for sharing the Passion!

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