Hello my friends Steemians!

Here is my second poem, I am just a beginner, but I am loving it already. Hope you like it.

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Star bright, start light
Little star shines so bright
Sailor man still has a doubt
Will the little star brake his mind

Sugar and spice and everything nice
Come sailor man in my iceland
Brake it slowly brake it gently
Drop all your weary

Horizon is curvy but colorful as rainbow
No drama only lava
Roses are red and so as cherries
Little stars shadow is depth

Will the mighty sailor follow the stars to the Ἀσία?

I would love to hear your thoughts, or maybe you can continue the poem... Thank you so much, my friends for stopping by.

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