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in #poetry8 years ago (edited)

H!!! STEEM!AN



I often ask the night

about the meaning of my dreams
which is never complete
that gets stuck
on the sidelines of my watch

he was silent
is the sea that answers it
with the wind blowing
with its waves crashing
with white foam
which is lined by the beach

a dream
a foaming ideal that is not up
is in a wave swing
The one that flows incessantly
who met the beach

while watching all my dreams become the sea
the foreigner, who does not know the sea
who forgot his foam on the beach
and only remember one word

annunciation

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I like the imagery of this poem, @irmadayanti! You should enter some of the poetry contests on Steemit.
Cheers!

one of his what is the contest?
I also recently made a post poetry

@irmadayanti, here is a link to a weekly report that has links to all kinds of writing contests on Steemit:

https://steemit.com/contest/@moneyinfant/steemit-writing-contests-issue-32-february-26-2018

Cheers!

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Nice piece. Do you write for any contests? Joy

You really should. Check out @davemccoy. I think you'd win a lot with you writing style. :). Joy

what should i ask

He advertises contests. Alao @mctiller has a writing contests too.

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