I Can Freeze Time
I've always been able to stop time
it comes naturally to me
i can stop it in any place i want
wherever that may be
I decide to stop it in school sometimes
i've also stopped it whilst in shops, but committed no crimes
sometimes i even stop it in the dead of night
so i can wander outside and start to write
Nobody knows that i can stop time
the only one who will ever know is the reader of this rhyme
but i know that nobody is able to stop it
and nobody will be able to prove i am the culprit
I actually stopped time just a few minutes ago
there was something very wrong, though
out of the corner of my eye, as everyone was frozen still
i saw something, which i did not will
I saw a girl.
she was moving.
Nice poem, you are not the only one! :)
Thank you so much!
I will stop time right now and freeze it in the bottom of my dreams.
Nice2meetU !
Thank you so much, Hope you loved it. Nice to meet you too. Such a pleasure to have you as my guest :)
A too sleepy one 🦄
I am looking forward for more visits.
That one poem is sweet. I planning to read more tomorrow
That will be my real pleasure, Thank you so much. Have a lovely weekend.
Great poem!
Glad you loved it, Thank you so much!
The last 2 lines didn't rhyme! :D
Just kidding, poetic license ;)
The concept of stopping times brings to mind theories of multidimensions where time is one dimension and an observer in the next higher dimension would be able to view time from "outside", which makes me wonder, could that observer then view time in reverse?
Just some thoughts your excellent writing inspired, great stuff mate :)
Interesting poem @inviter
I wish i could really freeze time.
Really impressive!