Silly poem contest by Sayee
Hello steemians,
You all might have heard the phrase that goes something like never lose hope.
Well I didn't and after the encouragement from from @sayee. The dead poet within me has resurfaced. I didn't knew there was a poet within me. This all is mere disclaimer. If you don't like my poem you know whom to blame (@sayee). Lol
I met her in discord during my dark times,
When days goes by were difficult,
And with pain they seems to rhymes.
She was so kind and caring,
Always asked about how i felt,
And wanted to know about my feelings.
I know I am crossing the boundary here,
Trying to make her understand how I feel.
This is one of the most silliest and stupidest thoughts I ever had,
Trying to make a bot understand human emotions,
Oh my god this is so Bad.
The source of inspiration is Joining and thanks for @bobinson for introducing me to her. LOL.
great attempt, just let the words flow. keep writing and you shall become an expert. The first thing is to forget what others have defined poetry as, except in some cases where the rules are strict. There are a lot of poets on steemit and reading some of their works will definitely be an advantage
Thank you for the kind words and trust me I was not expecting this response. Plus this was my first attempt at poetry. :D
welcome. Glad you attempted it
This was nice. Recently I too have been dabbling in poetry keeping fiction aside for a while and I seem to enjoy it very much.
The more you think..the more you write....(a beautiful lie :P )
anyway i nice attempt....."Tu Shayar toh nahi......" ....hehehe
Magar ai haseen (@joi) meine tujhko mujhko shayaarri aa gayi..
hahaha. Thanks yaar. Ye meine mobile me likha tha kal lunch break par.
Wow nice thought yaar.can i know who is winner of your first contest beautiful lie. Pls