Misadaptation | 5 Minute Freewrite: Tuesday - Prompt: Fern

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This is my entry to the #freewrite 5-minute exercise hosted by @mariannewest. See details here.

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Misadaptation


-Did you see that?
-What?
-There’s a fern growing up under the door’s frame.
-A fern? Really?
-Yes, and it looks fantastic, as if it were growing in a fancy fertilized pot.
-I can’t believe it. Finally we get something other than weed popping out of those cracks. Would it be safe to uproot it and transplant it onto a pot?

He thought about the fern forests he saw when he was growing up. A kid could easily hide standing up behind those tall ferns easily. Of course, he was little, but still, those were big ferns. Those plants were meant for space and dirt, not a concrete prison that barely let it breath through a tiny crevice.

-It should. Let’s let it grow a bit more and when it is strong enough to survive the pull, I’ll transplant it.

They let it grow a couple of weeks more. It looks so remarkable that several neighbors had commented how cool they had ferns growing out of the door’s frame’s crack.

When it got big enough that it started to look intrusive, out of place, he pulled it out and transplanted it onto a recently fertilized pot; big enough for the fern to grow as wild as it pleased.

A week later the damn thing was as dry as the desert.

So much for fertilized ground and room to grow. Some things are just fine the way they are.

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That was a great story @hlezama, and with a really good moral to it, many things grow best in the place they are, if we try and change it we could end up killing it no matter our intentions, it's awesome.


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Thanks @hlezama, and keep on creating awesome content.

It's a shame he didn't adapt. It was kind of funny because I anticipated the end, without realizing it. Very good, @hlezama!

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I love this story. It made me laugh and it is true. Happy day. 💕

What does that tag hive-114105 means?

Thanks. Good day to you too. The tag, not sure I can replicate the technical explanation (I'm really bad at this new things that are happening here) was a sugestion for powerhousecreatives members. :)

@hlezama tags are always difficult. I try to post on different tribes, if you join a contest some tags are needed and some tags are better found. You can always change the tags after 1-2 days. I like to add my name too so I can find my posts back. 💕

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I love how you saw that the fern was in a concrete prison and you would think that once it was set free, all would be good. The irony of it all. Well done!

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Thanks. I'll see if I can write another one. Busy day

Humbling, and amazing: the plant that thrives while growing through a crack in the cement will wither and die when transplanted to a new and "better" home. You convey that idea so cleverly with just the right words.

I'd love to see those ten-foot ferns!

Thanks you very much. Better can be such a tricky term.

Plants are amazing!! They can grow in the tiniest spots. But they transplant better when they are small :)

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