To All Those Who Lost

in #poem9 years ago (edited)

I am not much of a poet.

I only do it together with life as my duet.

This poem is dedicated to those who lost.
And to those who still fought

To have a clear understanding to these but got naught.

In life, there would be ups and downs.

Some may seem to carry the thorns.

The seemingly tragic circumstances make no sense at times.

Hard as we try to make it have reasons or rhymes.

Bad things still happen to good people.

Try as much as you can to rewind time to check the previous sequel.

Live every day as it would be your last.

For one day it would be true and all you've got is the past.

A thousand tears flowing in rivers of despair.

Can only break one's heart beyond repair.

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The relentless clock ever moves, bringing each of us to our knees.

Till then we could only do the macabre dance, our breath only as fleeting as the candle in the breeze.

This little poem is dedicated to @surpassinggoogle and to all those who lost, and to those who are still fighting.

The futility and inevitability of things leave all a little confused. The questions, the absolutely meaningless randomness of it all leaves us wondering.

May we all experience peace in all our dealings and endeavors.

Regards,
@greenrun

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hello @greenrun

hats off to you man. you are a man of true talents

cheers

@dante31

Still learning, you guys are longer in the game.

I choose not to get emotional... full stop!😐.

I love this piece... full stop!

You are great writer... fulll.......🙂.

May her soul rest in the lord.

I really wish words could help at this time. Thank you.

You don't know how much I wished that could happen. In fact that our tears, words and heart desires could wake the dead. But it keeps coming to take those we love away.

Same here too

Live every day as it would be your last.
I think we alway forget it%( As if life will last forever - things to do, talks sometimes you do not need, life is flying fast and thanks to people like you we can stop and reflect on what is happening to us. Such a touching peice and I thank you for it with all of my heart!
Although death of someone close to us is hard we should always remember the real truth%))

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Thank you for the kind, beautiful, and heartfelt reply.

Beautiful poem @greenrun....you sure have a talent for many things. Loosing someone is painful. But sometimes is best we let them Go. When my Dad was about to pass, i was praying that he shouldnt die yet, as i have not done those things i planned for him. But he told me something, he said
" let me go. My body is weak and in pains, where i am going i will find peace and free from pains"
Then he passed. And all i could see of him even as he lay lifeless was a smile on his face(thats is the picture of him in my mind always). I Miss him, but he was happy to go.
Death is pain to only those that live, but to those he(death) visit, It bring peace.

Sometimes wanting the people we love to stay longer, especially when they are in great deal of pain, may seem selfish. But we are only human, we do the things humans do; want our loved ones to stay on. Accept my condolence on your dad. He sounds like a great man and must be proud to raise such an awesome daughter. Thanks.

"Sometimes bad things happen to good people"
Life itself is unfair. Buh do you know, sometimes i envy the dead. The are resting and are not suffering in this wicked world. When i think of the huge responsiblity on my tiny shoulders and how much everyone is looking up to me, and how am even scared to make a tiny mistake, sometimes i wish am resting....... Jux thinking

Tarry a little. There's always rest after. Thank you.

I really know the feelings. I lost my dad when I needed him the most. Out consolation is that they are in a better place

Sorry for your loss my fellow steemian.

Thanks bro. It's been a little while it happened though

Time could only reduce the effect, never removes it.

Exactly bro. Cos the void created is still there

We only need to remember the good times. It helps.

That's the only way to go about it.

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Amen. Life is indeed filled with questions as to why somethings happen the way they do but we never can get answers. So live one day at a time and take everything that happens in its stride. A great poem.

Thank you very much.

Beautiful poem. I am glad you dedicated it to @surpassing google. Welldone!

That's the least I could do.

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