Goodbye - An Original Poem
As she said goodbye
But with that tone
Oh, what an eerie tone
The tone was of one
Who was going on a long journey
But all that mortar and glue
That held the words together
Was laced with sticky remorse
Sticking to where ever it landed
And beating the walls like drums
That vibrated the room
So my ears could hear it
My mind claimed to be psychic
And said that sometime today
She'll be dead
My mind showed me
The few times out of many
That it's predictions came true
And I was it's rube
She will be fine
But what about that warning
That haunts my time
I can not shake it
As it lingers in the air
Just floating there
Like another worry
For me to ignore
Maybe I've seen too many movies
And this just resembled
All the clichés
That I've seen
Hundreds of times
Then everything is fine
But what if God
Has seen the same movies
And is letting me know
To say goodbye
nice poem
Goodbye!
Thank You :)
Message comes accross well, thank you
I am glad, that is something that I am still working on.
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I like the eerie vibe.
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