Tatataboo

in #poetry9 years ago (edited)

Tatataboo original poetry by @girlwithoutwings

In an ideal word i might comb my hair, stick on some make up and not do this in my crappy car. But not all of the worlds are ideal all of the time <3 In my defence I had actually just returned from a massive walk in the hills and had tried to record it up there but it was too windy!

@jerrytsuseer thank you for my wings :)

My blog is story telling, often in verse, and some of which includes tales of both living with, and crushing,
seronegative arthritis. All work is original.
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Very good. Poetry should not only be read but it should be seen and heard as well. You should post this on Dtube.

Performing your work is transformational - not just in getting it 'out there,' but alters cadences, rhythms and even brings out deeper meaning. I love performing my work. Not usually in the car tho :) Did you mean you tube?

You're right. Knowing that a poem will be read out loud alters how it is written. It makes for a whole new experience.

No, I meant dtube. It's a new video platform like YouTube except it's powered by Steem. Check it out. dtube.video

Oh AWESOME! loved your poetry dice entry btw. will follow you now :)

Thank you. Followed you as well. :)

WOW, that is full on amazing. You have a new fan.

Thank you <3 It's dedicated to a very special person that I learnt yesterday I never need to see ever again. i am SOOOOOOOOOOO relieved. hahahah now that IS a long complicated story :) I've got another poem I love to perform that my rap pals persuaded me to do to a beat box and it's really really funny but I seriously need to rehearse/ redo as I sound proper way too posh !

I look forward to hearing it! If you use Discord, we have a community for new users where you can meet other people and network. If you are interested here's the link: https://discord.gg/wTg53q

Wow thank you that is really helpful. I'm away now for a week - will keep checking in when I can but will jump straight into this when back :)

Man, you rocked this performance. That was an awesome display wordsmithing. You should be proud. Great write.

Cheers! My writing defo improved from learninf by heart :)

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Thank you so much!

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Why thank you! :)

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