Another Day.
Pain.
Overwhelming.
Insane.
Impossible to bare.
Yet I do.
Every day.
Insanity.
More than is possible.
Yet I continue.
I continue on.
Walking.
Breathing.
Living.
Feeling.
Insanity.
Overwhelming.
Pain.
Another pill to pop.
But it is overwhelming.
Who will win?
Me or the pain.
Or the pill.
Continue on.
Go.
Another day.
Another pain.
Another pill.
Too much.
Not enough.
Continue.
Rewind.
Overwhelm.
Continue.
Breath.
Relax.
Ignore.
Breath.
Feel.
Too much.
Ignore.
Focus.
Away.
Ignore.
Continue.
Too much.
Too little.
Must continue.
Breath on.
Restraint.
Bare.
Breath.
Ignore.
Relax.
Die.
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I love the structure and intentional gaps between the lines : feels like the hero was passing out from time to time - the repetition underlines it too, losing concentration and train of thought. Kept me involved!
This is deep. I relate to this. I love it!
:( as chronic pain sufferer this guts me :( I am so sorry :(
Hope life picks up for you @geekpowered
Here is hoping the sun shines for you today, and if it is not sun you want, I hope a gentle shade keeps you cool. Other than that... life can suck and I have no real advice on the matter accept keep doing what your doing until it feels "right" momentarily.
It's just a poem.
True, and this is just a comment.