Sifting Through The Sands Of Time (#365daysofwriting) Challenge

in #life8 years ago (edited)

Time of wonders dead and Gone,

Just a frail old man who hums his Song,

A memory just one, or Two?

They really sometimes come Unglued,

Was that the Way?

It's really very hard to Say,

I can't remember what to Do,

I guess I'll kiss the sun with You.

Would you stop and take the Time,

To help me sift through sands of Time?

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@futuremind

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Loved the way you captured.
Followed you.

Thank you for the compliment . Followed back .

It's my pleasure.
And thanks for following too.

this piece certainly has the voice of an experienced traveler, the words speak to someone caught in both the present and the past. much like we all trend towards a known past then an uncertain future.

a fun little jaunt through the annuals of memory and time, you have here @futuremind, thank you for taking me on the journey with you.

@carmalain7 I was not sure that the humorous jests behind this would be picked up by anyone. Your perception of my piece is spot on! Thank you for taking the time to stop by, and connect with me. I will certainly be following you, and reading your work! We shall meet again.

Nice work there..
I also try my hand at short poems..
Have a look, maybe you'll like it
https://steemit.com/poetry/@rjunaid12/broken-and-bruised

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