Leave Me Be.
Running away
but I’m finding it still.
Like my spirit had gone ahead
and carved its own will.
And my head is just a head
hanging out up on a stake
with a few meters of thread
holding it all in place.
Quietly,
the deafening silence makes way.
In this cave,
I am led like a bride down the aisle.
This day should have
been of the sort under veils.
Never seen.
Only heard.
But somewhere in between
my bridges burned.
Now I’m caught up in this.
Promising madness.
Why won’t you leave me be?
Can’t you see?
I’m no fit for your fantasy.
Leave me be.
Initially I thought it was a sonnet, then after the first 14 lines, I felt it was a 16- line rhythm and rap bars, not until I counted 24 lines of perfectly-knitted words that convey the muse's feelings. Terrific, I must admit.
wow words choice really so nice i feel its everything about you :) best poetry
Thanks 🙏🏽
no need thanks just need your special vote ^_^
your Imagination is great
Thanks a lot. I appreciate
Oh wow! Tell me Fi, what inspired this poem?
Hehe... it’s something from the archives. From a dark and twisted time. 😊
No wonder!Bless God