First World Problem?
And on those once in a blue moon days
when I've got nothing to offer,
Would you still hold me in your gaze
or in another's arm run for cover?
Will your space still be my space or would I have become a bother?
I wonder. If you'll still look at me with your smile so tender.
I surrender,
I've got all these feelings running helter-skelter.
I remember,
I'm a victim of your charming persona
Just last December,
I thought I had had it all worked out
Turned out, I had to do it one more time
So I hope you'll understand (I hope you do)
When I say i'm not the man (I used to be)
I'm just going through this life with no tutor for me
None of the folks trying to help know what it feels like to be me.
Great poem, I kinda was rapping/singing when you got to the part " so I hope you'll understand, (I hope you do)". Haha keep posting!
I kinda might have written it with a rap beat in mind 😂 So you're absolutely right to rap along 😉
That part could be the chorus/hook
Lovely.
So enjoyed reading your poem.
Happy Friday✨
Amazing! Thanks a lot.
Enjoy your weekend
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Beautiful, @fisteganos! You don't need a tutor, it seems like you are finding your way alone just fine!
Hope you keep on posting quality poetry in Steemit!
Thanks. I used to and now I hope I'd be more consistent.
You should! We of @poetrytrail are always looking for quality content like yours! Hope you will hop on too and take part in our poetry events, it would be a shame if we couldn’t share this great poetry with more of the community!
Very beautiful poem.
Thank you for sharing :-D
Take care,
Thanks for the compliment 😊
My pleasure :) Best regards,