The darkness of the night!. Fifty-word short story.
The human race is a very, very magical race. We have a magic power of witches and wizards. We're here on this earth to unravel the mystery of this planet. The planet is asking for it. Yoko Ono
Dear steemeans
Now I participate again in the challenge of @jayna
This week's Fifty-word challenge prompt for the week!the word witch is the key.
I participate by the invitation of my friend @creatr
Now I invite my friends @lydon.sipe and @simonjay
Let's see the meaning of witch.
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The darkness of the night settled on the meadow where the silence dominated.
Suddenly a loud cry of supplication was heard asking for the release of a soul.
There a bewildered witch begged God to assist her in such a delicate moment.
The night was determined not to help her.
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Do not despise the memories of the past ...
Treasure them in the heart!
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Waiting for your upvotes , comments and resteem.
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That's a belter of an opening line to set the scene. You then weaved a great little story that packs a punch and ask some questions. Very well played sir 👍
Thank you very much my dear @ablaze
Amazing image to accompany your 50 word story. And I learnt a new word 'supplication'.
Thank you very much for your comment and I was delighted that you mentioned the new word you learned
@gaby-crb
Greetings, @felixgarciap. Pretty ambiguous. Was she the one in trouble or was she trying to help another soul? It made me think of the fact that many so-called witches, especially in our venezuelan towns were nothing but curanderas (healers) or parteras (midwives).
When I thought about the story, the witch was at that moment trying to help a soul in that delicate place. Also friend @hlezama I loved your interpretation of the moment. Receive my affections.
Interesting take for a witch to ask for God's help. I like it.
Maybe change at that moment. Thanks for your reflection
I really enjoyed this 50-word story, @felixgarciap. I think it is your best one yet. You've incorporated some important elements: a character, a scene, a conflict, a story arc (the witch begging God to help her) and something of a resolution (the night refusing to help her).
It is very difficult to get all of these elements into a 50-word story! Well done. (Be sure to add a period after the last sentence.)
Thank you very much @jayna for your evaluation of my story of the witch. Receive my affections .