Brutally Honest: 17 - Wind I

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Dicing with death seemed to be a regular aspect of my life growing up, as you have seen. From careening my Astra through rain soaked tarmac to threats of physical violence made against me or the friends I hung out with. I assumed it simply came with the territory of the neighbourhood I lived in. There was no other logical explanation for it. Though I did ponder the question. Is it possible for a street to be inherently cursed? Can an inanimate space lined with hovels for resident’s to dwell within, carry with it a burden of bad omens? Well, after I further elaborate on that bold statement below, you yourself may re-evaluate the validity to that eerie quandary…


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To justifiably describe the inexplicable and catastrophic nature of this next episode in my life, an ordered sequential first person account of what transpired that day, is in order. So, here goes. It’s early afternoon. Around one, maybe a little later, if memory serves me correct. Just an average overcast day with grey skies and the usual subdued, bland daylight emanating from the clouds above. I’m in my office, typing up a document for work and on the verge of running out the front door to grab some much-needed lunch from up the road. I recall clearly as I prepared to act upon this carnivorous instinctual brainwave, that the dull ambient light pervading through to my office walls, began to fade. Unnaturally fast. This all happened in a matter of seconds. Scrunching my face up at such a sweeping change, I thought it wise to peer out the window to “get a closer look” at what in the hell was going on. The exact same sky that was, just a few moments prior, dreary and grey, had now transformed into an unholy composition of dark and murky gloom. It looked like evening had set in, within a matter of seconds!

I remember audibly cursing out loud at this strange turn of events. Being pretty sure I wasn't caught in the throes of some fantastical dream. Anyways, the heavens lingered like this for a few minutes more. Angry and tormented, overlooking the city below. Then I heard a sharp crack. Akin to a stone being hurled out of nowhere. Again and again, until a hail storm, the likes of which I’ve never seen, battered the ground below. And let me assure you, this was no ordinary hailstorm. The floor outside was awash in a sea of white as I watched on in horror, the weather seemingly taking on a raging personality of its own. I kid you not, this all took place before my very eyes. However it eventually subsided as fast as it arrived, leaving the floor appearing as if someone has poured a tonne of polystyrene spheres everywhere. It was surreal.

”What on earth is next?” I whispered, stunned at the peculiarities unfolding before me. Well, be careful what you wish for, as I was soon to find out… the hard way.

I recall a swift breeze stirring after the quiet following the sudden hailstorm. Only this breeze gathered pace. If fast become a rushing wind and blew a few scant particles high into the air. Mainly those white stones and a little road grit. But it gathered yet more strength. It all happened so fast, I could barely keep track of what was going on. Several more seconds passed and the wind rose to a furious roar. The last thing I observed was the air immediately in front of me, filled with road debris and dust. All blowing in one single direction! I dove under my desk as I hadn’t a clue what in the name of Hades was causing this. But I knew I was terrified beyond belief.

Then it hit. A noise unlike anything I’ve ever heard in my life, up until this very day. The closest description I can liken it to is a combination of freight train and jet aircraft both sounding off right next to your ears. I found myself enveloped by a deafening, high-pitched scream which shook the foundations of my house to its very core. Wooden roof rafters rattled like loose piano keys as the din reached a fevered howl. Fear took hold of me to the point where I was frightened for my life! Then, after some further moments of thunderous cacophony, everything restored back to normality again. God, I was so shaken. Literally. After my mind pulled itself back to the realms of reality again, the first thing that caught my mind's attention was a loud crashing sound in the background somewhere.

I crawled out from the flimsy makeshift shelter of my desk and hurried into the other room. I couldn’t believe what I was seeing. A huge metal scaffolding pole was protruding into my bedroom through a sliver of broken window. It didn’t make sense. A pole thrown off its perch and into my personal space? I shuffled over to it, somewhat still in temporary disbelief. Through the cracked glass next to me, I heard a man on the phone. A voice as familiar to me as any. Ben, my next door neighbour. Frantic for some rational truth to this unexpected nightmare, I ran downstairs and into the street. He was on the phone, talking fast and looking gravely concerned.

”Ben”. I called out. ”Do you know what just happened a minute ago?” Turning to me, he signalled using a hand gesture toward the adjacent street round the corner. ”Never mind about anything else. Just take a look down there!” Confused, I opted to satiate my curiosity independently than rather stick around for a possible plausible explanation to all this. Peering around the sharp bend forking out to the left of the street, I beheld a sight that would change my life forever…

(To be continued...)

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Hope you enjoyed this story, please look out for more on the way... (author: @ezzy)


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Oh well, now I am hooked @ezzy - you got that literary roll going on that I don't wanna stop reading :D

Thanks, my brother! This was one of the craziest events in my life... period! :)

Yep i enjoy this story a lot .
Keep going on . i expecting more from you like this . it will be fun to read your story again .

Thanks very much, man. More coming pretty soon. :)

Well this is first time i am going through your blog and for sure i am amazed with the depth you determine your thoughts. Anyways it could be a case when Street is surrounded by an omen. Anyways nice an escape you didn't go for the lunch at that moment or few moments before. It for sure would had been a quite a bit experience

Lol, yeah. I consider myself extremely lucky to have stayed indoors when I did. Possibly due to the insane weather conditions before the "eye" hit.

An eye to stay away from. Anyways eye is relatively calm its the adjoining area which is more of bitter.

Way to end it on a cliffhanger! Now I want to know what happened next :(
On a side note, where exactly do you live?

Thank you, man! I've be wrapping this one up later tonight. And I hail from London, England. Hence the absolute insanity of something like this coming to our shores...

I think it was a 🌪. What else should it be. But you always surprise me with unexpected moments. If that was a tornado I went through something similar except there wasn’t any, luckilly. I lived in Tennessee US for a year and that day it looked like a hell. I will never forget that day. It changed in a mater of minutes.

I live in London where the weather is known to stay the same, lol! USA I could see stuff like this happening, but slap bang in the middle of this city? Well, see where this goes in the next post... :)

That is a one crazy experience. You were lucky you didn’t leave for this lunch at that moment or few minutes before it happened. You were also lucky you were not in the bedroom. This was one hell of a storm.

Oh man! Was I ever??? Again I reiterate, that day changed my life forever. Sometimes you're just in the wrong place at the wrong time...

Loved the story, waiting for part 2. Are you an English speaker by any chance? You are really good at writing, i would love to be able to write like you, i'm thinking of reading some English books in the summer to better my writing skills, but it will probably not get any better...

I certainly am an English speaker, yes. Thanks for your kind words and I suggest you keep practicing with the English skills. It'll come in the end though even now, I think you're doing a great job! :)

Great, suspenseful ending

really i enjoy it, very interesting.

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