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RE: Tra Cielo e Mare | Between Sky and Sea.

in Freewriters3 months ago (edited)

Really I love it.

Can I write something similar.

sea
mirror of the Moon
its lights penetrate
to explore the underneath
minnows, dolphin and whales
how could they live together
better to dive deep.
to feel the narcosis.

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I wonder about the narcosis

If you like to write this simply make a post out of it and post in this community. Words aren't counted it's about creativity. 😉

Thank you for your kind words and encouragement.
Regarding the narcosis or the nitrogen narcosis, it is a common state with the divers when they breathe compressed nitrogen.
it is also called (depth intoxication or rapture of the deep).

Thank you for the answer. I learned something. 👍

A great day to you.

The alteration of the state of consciousness that this beautiful poem causes is interesting.
Thanks @eskarem

@wakeupkitty has already recommended the best for you, have a nice day👋

A good try and feel free to join us with thebamount of words you like. 👍

Is it a poem? Beautiful fishes deserve to peacefully live together🐳

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