A Writer's Words
I am sick of this kind of eternal oblivion.
Helpless soul and tired eyes
All efforts as if wasted
Vain heart but I must stop
Embrace the goodness always.
Memory full of memories
I can’t even move my pen
Loosing words to say
Loosing the will to stay
I can feel pain within
Out of nothing but still looking
Never surrender and keep on going.
Rare thoughts to catch
Everlasting peace of mind
A hand begging to dance
Sleeping ideas inside
Overthinking of many things
Now seeking for help
Save me please, save me.
To continue the battle and win
Or just cry and take a rest.
Going in or out, in or out
I am confused but I have to choose
Very tired of this cycle
Exposed to obscurity.
Undeniable pressure all over my body
Painting days with gray.
Inevitable land of sadness
Near to hole of death.
Scars of life and still bleeding
Trace of hardship that kills
Envy and greed that flow
Exhausted and drained to zero
Meaningless attempts that are useless
Irrational decisions and mistakes
Teardrops of suffering.
Beauty in sorrow, is there any?
Under the shallow of downfall
Terrified to try and see.
Emptiness in the aisle of madness
Venomous ambition and desire.
Enigmatic vision in a faraway places
Reality in fantasies living in my dreams
Yearning for freedom that I wish.
Totally devastated from this ache
In my own nightmare of struggles
Monstrous heaviness of guilt and anger
Explosion of anxiety, free at last.
I feel weak, am I weak?
Trying to be productive and effective
Hearing sounds of victory along the way
Instead of weeping in the corner
Now ready to stand and start again
Knowing that The Almighty is there.
Am I strong enough to take off?
Being a fighter I must be
On the clouds I will fly
Up in the sky I will shine
Teardrops of pain into gain.
Meet me in the island of trophies
You and I will shout to celebrate.
Pen will now move
A hand will now dance
Sorrows are gone
Sadness are done
In God I will trust
On the green grass I will jump
No more of staying in the darkness.
Tomorrow I am excited
On what life will bring next.
Welcoming the smile of the sun
Raining of blessings from above
Indeed a joyful moment to rejoice
Today is a present to be thankful
Everything is fine and fruitful.
Is this what you called life?
This is life, this is life.
Give me the power to hold on
In the race I must never leave
Very careful in my steps
Endless journey of a fearless spirit.
Make your own rainbow of masterpiece
Enjoy the seconds of minutes.
Stay positive in the line of survival
Together we will never dare to stop
Reach the impossible because “I’m Possible”
Everything starts from nothing
Not a quitter so get up and rise
Go and run up to the finish line
To success we will cheer
Higher dear, aim high.
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Pam super ganda ang iyong mga obra..maraming salamat sa pag share
Maraming salamat po sir sa pagbasa at pagtangkilik ng mga sulat ko.
Such a powerful sentiment, @escuetapamela, and one that made for a very creative and explorative poem and read. I think that your words belly your passion for them, I can read your strength in every line.
The message in these lines strikes me the most, an extension of being present in a world caught between the past and future. Yes, in this couplet, I see the heart of a writer.
I believe in you, Pamela, and I believe in your passion and dedication. You are a writer now, and will be an even better writer tomorrow, and an even better writer the day after that.
Here to support you along your journey, good miss.
Sir Alain, you never failed to make me smile in your every comments.
Your words are always full of sense and inspiration.
Big thanks for always supporting me. :)
i love this post.
really love it
giving up should never be on our list.
yes
we keep it going higher and higher.
keep safe
Thank you so much dear :)
Let's keep on steeming!
Wonderful words, Pamela. I am not into poems, not an expert of it, but I love the message of your poem. More than the urge to write on Steemit, the poem talks about finding courage to live life.
Wonderful! :)
You are so sweet dear. Thank you so much for reading my poem. Let's keep on steeming together. God bless you always.
this is a fun post, pretty impressive that you were able to put together a poem that is actually pretty cohesive with good flow to it and still have the first letters of each sentence form a phrase. Very clever :) Much love - Carl
Thank you so much for your kinds words sir, it really melt my heart. Your appreciation boost my spirit.
People like you are my reason to continue my passion though there are times that I already want to give up.
ganda sis :) upvoted :)
Thanks much sis, have a nice day ahead.
you made me move to a corner of that writer's room and imagine that he said all that
Thank you so much for appreciating it sweetheart. :)
nice
Thank you sir :)
nice writing there... that's a very cool technique. i hope u aren't serious about giving up tho.. u r too good.. ur posts are too good.. why would u ever give up?? never give up. never surrender! :)
Aww you are so kind! Thanks Ben! :D