EXCITEMENT

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

Finally they had found the excitement-gene and decided to eliminate it. All newborns were relieved by the corresponding DNA parts.

But after only a few days they died because their parents had forgotten them. The babies had not made themselves noticed and had not gotten excited as there was no pain or loneliness and they had died peacefully.

Then the researchers shifted to somewhat older people. But even they forgot to get up in the morning and participate in life.

Eventually, because they knew the method, they switched to very old people. But this made the people in the elderly homes dissatisfied, because the elderly did not care about the missing visits of relatives and also died without a sound. So the old people's nurses were robbed of the value of their work.

Then they knew where the method should be used best: With the serious criminals in prison. But those who had been injured by the criminals got upset and said that they should feel their punishment.

Finally, the researchers tried the method on themselves, because they did not want to believe that one could lead a good life with all available genes. This plunged the relatives of the researchers into deep distress, so that they also wanted to have the excitement-genes removed.

But the method had already been banned.

Now those who couldn't understand the ban got excited and wanted to try it on very young people ...

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You have managed to create a perfect loop of the absurd.

Your story is funny, and wise, kind of like those fables that have lasted forever and are written by "Anonymous". The fables always offer insight into human nature, and usually we shake our heads at someone's folly.

This story deserves a place among the best of the fables.

Thank you:) I love fables - this little story was just coming out without any effort whatsoever.
I am happy that you also found the funny aspect in it. Didn't want to sound deadly serious.

Yes, there are circulating some quite good narrations from "Anonymous". In fact, they are not easy to find when one looks for them in a determined way. I always find them by accident. :)

I think that's what they call inspiration :)

Sometimes stuff just comes to you, and because you haven't struggled with it, there's an essential truth and honesty.

Finally, the researchers tried the method on themselves, because they did not want to believe that one could lead a good life with all available genes.

LOL. Researchers. What you gonna do? :D

:-)) LOL. That gave me a good laugh. Yeah, what do we actually know anyway? And do we not know everything at the same time?

I am planing on an article about intuition. Do you got something new? I will go and have a peep.
Great, that you are back again!

I am planing on an article about intuition.

Oh, that would be an interesting post! I am a person who never hears her intuition. I don't know if I have any :D I am looking forward to your article!

It's out;)
Oh, right now your intuition is on shift! You use it much more as a mother of a little one. No space for flirting with imagined short comings of you! LOL ;-)

Oh, dear! What a round! And, so it goes~

on and on and on. :))

...and this is why socialism is evil!

lolol. Very nice piece!

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