todays poetry

in #feel8 years ago

 The best part
is when we’re tired
of it all
in the same degree,
a fatigue we imagine
to be temporary,
and we lie near each other,
toes touching.


What’s done is done,
we don’t say,
to begin our transaction,
each letting go of something
without really
bringing it to mind
until we’re lighter,
sicker,
older
and a current
runs between us
where our toes touch.
It feels unconditional. 

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Nice poem dear .

wow..nice poetry thanks for sharing..

uwellcome g .. and thanks

Wow.....amazing :P

hahaha thanks madam

Very subtle and evocative - I can feel the silent sighs of relief....(wish my vp was more atm!)

i am very greatfull to you i just need to make you inspired.
i am really glad that it was able to draw your your attention

I like your poetry - have followed you :)

It is really worth appreciation.

bundle of thanks

Your rhyme really influenced the heart. You are worth praising. Love from @Talatawan

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