Lose

in #poetry6 years ago

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I tried to reveal this veil
The story between you and me
Separated by space and time
Corner you leaving me

I feel lost
Your love is long gone
You went far because of my fault
Who never thought you were

Romance separates us
Remind me of yourself
The surge reminded me
That your love has entered my heart

I honestly can't
Life without you, I'm crazy
I wish you could
Repeating again our love
I won't waste you again

I honestly can't
Life without you, I'm crazy.
I won't waste you again.

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I value this for the expression of your emotions not that much for the poetry as it contains some mistakes and such.. those should be left to the grammar and syntax nazies.. but that is not important.
Thank you for sharing those emotions and opening to the world

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