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RE: Flash Fiction: Heart Stopper
hehehehehehe all's fair in love and war. hehehehe love and war - does the emotional response know the difference??? Your story says no ;)
this one actually made me start thinking deeper into the story. You usually do that to me - you know?
I get pulled into the scene so quickly - and then I want to know more about your characters hahahaha
I know!! Its a suspense thing she usually do! There must be something more eh..
Ohhh! She knows how to hook us up and think further of what might happen or what we want to happen.. hahaha..
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