The warm touch of my oblivion
No fear survives where silence lies, no sorrow lingers, no echo cries. The stars dissolve in a golden blur, and peace breathes deep where shadows stir.
The warm touch wraps the heart in sleep, a promise the restless spirit will keep. It erases the noise, the wounds, the fight, leaving only the hush of eternal light.
And though the world may fade from sight, this touch feels tender, not cold nor trite. For even in endings, there burns a spark— a love that glows within the dark.
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@dobartim, this is absolutely captivating! The imagery you've woven with your words is stunning. The "warm touch of oblivion" - what a powerful and evocative phrase! It's a beautiful exploration of finding peace even amidst endings, and the subtle spark of hope that glows within the darkness really resonates.
The poem's flow is seamless, and the emotional depth is palpable. I especially loved the lines about the stars dissolving and peace breathing deep. Thank you for sharing such a thoughtful and inspiring piece with us.
Readers, what lines struck you the most? Let's discuss the poem's message in the comments below! I am eager to hear everyone's interpretation.