Tree-Tub, a random Poem and Sketch.
Bathtub with a tree.
Always with the loud music.
You dance around me.
Can't you see me relaxing.
Just let me fucking be.
Always with the loud music.
You dance around me.
Can't you see me relaxing.
Just let me fucking be.
I want to thank @crimsonclad for inspiring both this drawing and this poem.
She told a story of a dark night-club and a tree in a tub.
This was what happened in my head after that story.
All her fault.
Thanks!
Hey @discordiant cute little piece of work! The poem is nice too, although I feel it would have sounded a bit better if the rhyme scheme was abcba. I love it when writing and art come together! :) I tried doing this myself; I would really appreciate it, do check out my new charcoal sketch here 🙂
I wasn't trying overly hard with the poem, since it was mostly intended to prevent the post from being a straight image only post. I will check out your work, thanks.
Oh I see, yep we all try not to post image-only posts 'cause it feels boring :) ... And I really apologise if you felt bad cuz I didn't mean it that way ..
Not bothered at all. A good critique is always welcome. I still liked the way this sounded when speaking it, but I can see where the other rhyming scheme would have worked too.
Hey thanks. Glad you didn't take it in a wrong way :)
I absolutely love this sketch! Nicely done!
Thanks, I rarely draw anything anymore, but this just had to get out.
smh, the language is so crimmy. What am I going to do with you kids!
Nice drawing, @discordiant
I like the hatching within the sketch.
If it wants to be a bathtree who are we to tell it not to be a bathtree. :)
@discordiant Thanks for publishing this Charming instant in time for yourself. Upvoted.
nice draw, i like the trace!
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@discordiant verry nice artwork,..
and beatifull quotes.
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