TORN .. DAY #10 POETRY CHALLENGE

in #steemitschoolpoetry6 years ago (edited)

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When are you coming back to me, my love?

When will the love we once shared be rekindled in your heart?

When will the spark in your eyes glow again?

When will your anger towards me die off?

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Remember the good pains we shared today

Remember the pains and all that we went through

Remember when you held my hands and promised never to let go

Remember all the promises we both made to each other
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I am sorry I let your hopes down, let me make this right

I am sorry I took you for granted, let me treat you right

I am sorry for the pains I inflicted on you, let me heal you

I am sorry for not giving you all of me, let me try again
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Your love for me is the best thing that happened to me, please do not withdraw it now

Love doesn't give up and neither should you, my love

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I like the last line. Love doesn't give up.. Should you....?

Love, it's such a universal feeling, we all know how it hurts and how it heals.

Please could you include a link to the steemit school discord group in your poetry challenge entry posts, as it's one of the rules to qualify each day for the daily prize.

Thanks for the reminder. Would do that now

Thank you :)

I like this love poem because it speaks to not giving up on love.

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