The cars are too loud [Day 22½]
The cars are too loud
original poetry & imagesSusurrus of vehicles flowing past
and away, away to other places
that other vehicles make ruckuses past
where other birdsong is drowned in anxiety
where other dragons swim in the heart's volcano.
You that come to me as a discordant epiphany:
I can feel you through concrete;
I sense your intention without temperatures.
Hold still while I button your cloak;
I must brace you against the storm
conjured by furnaces with their
portable sonicbooms.
You in the wrinkle and the slackless aged,
seen lacking in youth unhurried
that never finish crossing the street.
I almost say what I feel and refrain three times,
now the chosen one's betrayal is upon my extremities
like the static of a too-soft blanket
over skin, flesh over bone:
Watchtowers of bone, there you train me a crier,
bell-ringer, scalding oil-dumper, warhorn blower,
archer with flaming arrows of lard,
monk to project fifteen avatars in the clouds,
shapeshifter to sneak through puddles
on the tar, a ghost in the rainbow grease:
I am the bottom of the ocean of gasoline.
Glowing creatures swim in my mind,
they meld through the blood-brain barrier
into your blue-green, black-white world
where you listen to the machine symphony,
where you record it on phonograph discs
made of carbon & calcium & silicon.
Pen'd by
@d-pend
3/29/18
.Images created
by digital manipulation
of free domain photographs.
this time the idea was flown so far that it's hardly to catch it and to connect with usual cars-)
it's definite magic of your poems, while reading the title I'm going to read something about it, but it would be too simple and easy for you-) and you make a surprise and describe the idea in your own special manner, and a reader must guess your poem like a puzzle, it's interesting!
A couple of your old characters came out to play today:
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It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. One of the calming places I find. I really want to find that quiet place. This poem takes me back to the smells and sounds and feelings of my Dad's garage. Not a bad place to be:)
Wow so much for a car.😊😊😊
Amazing post @d-pend
old model car strong car
Most times I wonder how these words flow through your mind. I find it difficult sometimes to comprehend what you write. It requires deep thinking to understand. I equally do poems but I'm not a professional like you. I'm not a scholar of letters but I love poems. You can check out my blog to read my first poem.
Glowing creatures swim in my mind,
they meld through the blood-brain barrier
into your blue-green, black-white world
where you listen to the machine symphony,
where you record it on phonograph discs
made of carbon & calcium & silicon.
It is funny how in certain moments, it can be extraneous details that act the platform by which we remember the more meaningful. Smell is the most common vector of memory, but it can be sound. For me it is the quality of light.
As always, a truly quality and meaningful write.
This is so beautifully written, the passion in the words, the subtle rhymes and even the pictures leave you with some sort of imagination. Good job @d-pend. Keep steeming.
Love ❤,
@soorefunmi
I wonder how you use such perfect symbolic words to represent something.
How much time does it generally takes you to complete one poem ?
Hei @himshweta I was thinking the same thing too. I always read the poetry @d-pend and always amazed by the use of symbols.
Great post. Upvoted