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RE: Make, O Mirrored One

in #poetry5 years ago

Hey all. I have some... plans for this one. I'm not positive it's 100% finished as I did a lot of tinkering just now from the transcribed version (written by hand a few days back.)

I'll likely make a video/audio version of it, but not today because I'm thinking I should turn in early.

Anyway, it feels interesting (and a little uncomfortable) to write more freeform stuff again. When I wrote this piece it was rather channeled and came from a heartfelt space, but just not sure I've captured that same feeling.

I don't know... let me know what you think! And I'll look at it again with a fresh mind again tomorrow.

In gratitude,
Dan

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I really appreciated the flow of this one. The words felt good (and slightly uncomfortable) sliding off my tongue. It painted fun word pictures in my brain. :-)

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