Proofs past midnight [Day 47]
Proofs past midnight
Whisper-strokes,
I yearn to see your supple shape.
scent of mountain moonbeam,
woody, crisp edge
through air instantaneous
finding me in liminal glory.
losing myself, drowned in time;
floodgates, dams, cyclical enzymes,
aroma of life, decay, life.
whisper-touches
from the real world
into the artificial depths
unplunge me.
inversions of gravity,
at the center is a pin.
extrusion, ghostbone, aquifer of marrow,
I am summarized through this chaotic fount
of whisper-strokes
which I simply must see
in order to believe.
Written by
@d-pend
4/22/18
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Photography by
Psiheya
.1 — "Cold Colors" [cropped]
2 — "About Flowers"
3 — "Crystal Eternity"
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This is a really lovely poem... As usual, your choice of words was spot-on... However your expressions were really what left me stunned... There was a way they calmed my nerves and brought this soothing feeling while I read...
Only a master wordsmith is capable of what you have just achieved with this piece... Great job sir...
Your breathing relieves me, while I travel every grain of sand I have been in the least thought, touched your door and behind there is a story, I had not thought about it, but on my next trip I probably miss between every sigh in my way.
Thank you for inspiring me, every sentence you expose encourages me and I delves into my thoughts.
I really like the phrase “ whisper-touches” :)
How beautiful theme it is, it feels that someone is flowing in the melodious melody of a song or someone is enjoying the silence of the rain. You words are always magical and make my day.
Thank you so much @d-pend aka the Great Poet <3
I feel huge lust in this poem and very strong feelings of missing someone of something. Sometimes it is nice to experience that longing, as that provokes us to thrive for more, create more, achieve more. It can also become delusion for us, but all that is life and we should explore and experience each part of it.
You are expression different roles and states of mind so well through your poems. I love it.
I am summarized through a chaotic fount
of whisper-strokes
which I simply must see
in order to believe.
A look inside and then another. It's never enough; for we are forever changing. Glorious writing, Daniel:):):)
Hmmm ...
Great poem @d-pend. Your poetry is always realistic.
beautiful poetry with a line of interesting words to read 😍 thank you for sharing d-pend
This poem soothes me. It feels so serene and pious. Also sensual all at the same time. The words have a perfect flow. It's like music.Lovely💙