Prakṛti – dissolution – madness [Day 2]
Prakṛti – dissolution – madness
original poetry Lump guṇas – comatose
Great spirit – desolation – a brilliant flash
Is this some kind of
fleshly nirvana?
Cryogenic – broad potential
Under futurity's heat lamp—
—half-baked porpoise & angel
Call me a quadrillion names
out from under your shroud – broken voice box
Scathing, dry barks
Cast curses & compliments
Majesty of decadence
Pillar – pineal horseradish
Killing instinct of time
Foundation of the dismantled
Pronouns, liquefied road sound
In some cursed deity's mind
That brings light sporadic:
Shade sporadic of restitution.
Laser – sound – cone of eyes
Witness to miracles & the unspeakable,
Envisioner of horrendous monoliths,
Physical elements, alive in contradiction.
Written by
@d-pend
2/8/18
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Good piece @d-pend. Love the play of words, madness in a much more twisted form.
The markdown style seems to be distorted although, i think you should check it out.
And everyone reading this, join the Steemit School on Discord with the link above and learn a lot. There are different classes for different topics. @d-pend is there teaching poetry
Thank you @gamsam! Yes, this is free-formatting: using the
formula. Definitely experimental. Everyone should definitely join us, the sessions have been fantastic so far :-D https://discord.gg/Paja6pTLol, the mark down style is due to d-pend's markdown gymnastic skills. And i think that way you get the pauses right, plus its pleasing to the eye :)
Oh, @fego. Now i get it. It makes much more sense now that you've explained
Hahaha! love this. I think perhaps it is an acquired taste, this "free-formatting" :-)
It's a totally new thing to me... seeing poetry arranged in these strange ways... I love it!
It's inspired me to experiment with my poetry as I have lots I want to make into books one day... Adding this into it adds a whole new dimension or two into the entire thing... It seems even more like a piece of art... more of a painting with words...
Very cool!
The way you write fascinates me man... the depth of embedded metaphor and meaning that I'm sure I am yet to fully comprehend makes me wonder what else is possible in my own writing.
So cool to have found you and so many other amazing writers here on Steemit and in this challenge... and to be so inspired in so many different ways through it all...
Thank you again!
Gonna be an amazing few months!
With Love
Hart Floe Poet
<3
PS The form of this reminds me of a tornado - out of interest were you going for a particular shape?
Your write ups potraits a master of art in poetry, sometimes I envy your poems but I realize it’s your niche, it’s your passion. As my passion is music and I’m doing my best to be the best in what I do
. I submitted my second entry for the challenge but this how it is. I made my first Steemitschool promo song today so I submitted the lyrics as my poetry contest entry. Would that be considered?
wow very nice view i really like it. thanks for sharing. hopefully I can see your post always
Real awesome and beautiful poetry Thanks for sharing keep it up I love your poetry you have great thoughts thankss for sharing
Wow !!!!!
Excellent poem @d-pend ....Brelient writing...
You are really a good poet...
I think, In 100 days challenge ....you are the best
Good one sir i teally appreciate this one sir.
Am always impressed to read your post and to review your post any time, it is always motivational to read and coment on your post.
I really appreciate the flexibility of this post fir translating to other language.
Thank you sir @d-pend.
Thanks for your contribution @steemengine
I really enjoyed all!
beautiful artwork @d-pend.
thank you for sharing, I personally always waiting for your work
original work
brelient writing,i like your post
thanks @d-pend
Wow!
@d-pend, this is a lip-dropping piece. You are absolutely terrific...
You are poetry personified.
Keep doing the good work.