Pinced, Primed, Plumbed

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Pinced, Primed, Plumbed

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Placed, pressed, peeled—
.
I am the receptacle
of currents and
their containment.

.
On a high plain
The struggle adjourned.
The festivities began without
Libations, without any motion
Or a single sound.

Nixed, known, knelt—
.
I am an altar
of the forest
For the fires
That scour it.

.
In the ashes of trees
The wind reads the discernment
Of an age on a singed page.
.
My root-hands sink deep.
Into my brain of oak flows
A forgotten language.

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I am buffeted about
On an ocean of light.
Captured in a cage
By the stars, set free
By the shadow of
Their thoughts.


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Pen'd by
@d-pend
11/1/17

Images are
free domain use
& edited by me.


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The way you set free in poetic license is intruging.

I am buffeted about
On an ocean of light.
Captured in a cage
By the stars, set free
By the shadow of
Their thoughts

This quatrain here is statement of your ability to cook words into rhythm and shape.

You know i wrote an article about you, your lines are two sweet you are a good poet

You are the oak brain in the forgotten language of the universe,
the altar of new poetry and unbreakable dusty words of crazy agony in the tonalities of noisy avalanches and silences.I reconsider in your deep words that play dancing on the stars of human ignorance of consciousness - You are my man @d-pend

He @d-pend my brother how are you,? I like it it's pretty cool, I like the way you put the the nice pictures there too add to it, they go along with it just nicely, it's really cool, yeah I hope to see more from you and I appreciate your Poetry Man and we'll see you in the next one okay. Peace out brother, be well...

The roots of my being draw me into the hole of oblivion
For that it knows I need it to be so I can move forward and live beautifully

It flows beautifully I felt real peaceful reading this love it 😊

By the way, for those wondering, "pince" is what pincers do (of a crab or any sort of claw) ;)

excellent writing d-pend
thanks for good share

post your poetry is amazing ... 🤗

Thank you my friend @rambeesbd

yes 😊😊

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