This poem is very great. I love your use of the first person narrative device, the arrangement of the poem and also the diction.
Although I don't know how to write poems, when I see good ones, I don't hesitate to appreciate them. Nice one!!!
This poem is very great. I love your use of the first person narrative device, the arrangement of the poem and also the diction.
Although I don't know how to write poems, when I see good ones, I don't hesitate to appreciate them. Nice one!!!
Thank you - you obviously know the terminology - good comment