My Favorite Place [Poetry]

in #writing8 years ago

In those days,
When my hands did not reach that far,
Not even my feet walked too much,
I fell in love for the first time.
I looked at your sky,
Thinking of everything you would ever know.
I never imagined leaving you for a long time.

I could step on other lands,
Navigate the seas,
Reaching outer space
And then I would come back to you.
Because you were my home.
I was eight years old
And all my dreams started and ended with you.

North of the south,
At a point on planet earth,
Many think that you are anything,
Although to me you seem majestic.
With your sunrises that sing
And those nights that reveal,
You have a piece of my soul trapped in everything that makes you up.

There is that tower of France,
The antiquity of Italy,
The culture of Japan
Or the memories of Germany.
The new world that is Australia
And even the opportunities that North America can give you;
But I,
Innocently,
I think that between your beaches,
Your plains,
Your mountains and jungles,
There is no other place like you.

I fell in love for the first time,
Although I wanted to discover the mysteries of the world,
Your,
Venezuela,
You became my favorite place.


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This is the first time that we are dedicated to making a poem to share with you, dear Steemit family, and we thought it was a good idea that our first attempt was dedicated to the country where we were born and how much we love it (Even if it is not in your best moment), Venezuela. We are new to this, but we hope you like it and can tell us what you think about it; for us, your opinion is very valuable.

No more to say, from this side of the world, says goodbye with love @cafeconleche.

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Hi

Your poem really makes me wanna visit Venezuela.... sounds like a really lovely place to be

Hello!!

Thanks, I hope you can visit it at its best. It can be a beautiful place to meet.

I hope I get the chance to visit it one day

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