Lagos (A Poem)

in #nigeria9 years ago

Lagos

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You're a woman
With multiple legs
Crisscrossed above running waters
Your face is lovely,
Thou art lovely
Until we are found in your pubic
Then we curse the Day
We met you.
Therein we see the forlorn
Breed bearing stillborn
Hopes lying lifeless
In their slender lap under
Your legs, under the bridges.
We touch your face -
A beautiful bay bearing
Gardens all about.
We are amazed.
Thou art everything
For thou art united
By the very thing
That puts you asunder.
Thou art enough for us.

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Authors notes :

Lagos is the largest city in West Africa, very busy and surrounded by waters on all sides. Indeed it is the center of economic activities in Nigeria.

The poet writes this simple poem on transit in one of the public buses known as molué. He writes from third mainland bridge which connects Lagos Island with the Mainland. He muses about the beautiful attractions of the great city and also the slums where the homeless and destitutes struggle to etch out a living. The poem is written in free verse.

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It's funny that I've not been to Lagos, but this poem has said a lot about it.

Good job @buterdaniel

Hahaha, I went to Lagos for the first time last December and I fell in love immediately. You should like a trip there sometime

Your free verse juxtaposes Lagos' glamour with its less friendly parts (lol... pubic) nicely.
Good one, Daniel 👍👏

Hahaha, I'm pleased you enjoyed the read.

Thanks for commenting!

Èkó ò ní bàjé oooooo!

Hahaha @greenrun my own person eshé ooo

I think i should also inbibe this habit of writing on transit!!! It sure works,nice work @buterdaniel

Hahaha, you should try it sometime, it's awesome.

Tales of lasgidi...
Nice one @Buterdaniel

Thank you, thank you bro

😂 😂 😂 eko baje ti

😂 😂 😂 eko baje ti

Baba eshé oooo

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