My first poem. "lady luck"
Hello! Yesterday I thought a lot and had a little bit romantic mood. So I have written my first poem about the role of luck in our life. Hope, I will have some luck today, and my poem will be nice to you)
When you have done all that you could
and everything you need is wait
you hope that lady luck will have good mood
and makes a little intervention to your fate.
But fortune is a fickle girl
and nobody cant guess her thoughts
today she takes you to a funny swirl
tomorrow she will drop your life into the rots.
In moment man with nothing - gets money, glory, power
and jealousy comes quickly to the mind
"It isn't fair, why hell his changed to heaven in an hour!
where is my turn of lucky blowing wind?"
In such of sadness time we have forgotten
that fortune does not come to lazy boy
and water never flows under supine log rotten
so, hope for luck but be in work employ.
Nice, write more, it is interesting.
Thank you, I will try to write one more today, or tomorrow)
Nice poem! I wish us all luck today!
Thanks) luck will be on your side)
I appreciate it, you as well!
А по русский будет?
Нет, я не написал русский вариант, но если хотите, я попробую написать и стихи на русском.
Haha, I will read it when I will paly in casino!)
hope, it will help you.
I thought there was something, but it seems I have to reread everything to "feel"the luck, I guess I really need to "find ways" to decipher the hidden code in this poem.
sorry, if this poem was hard for you. My native language is Ukrainian, so it was a little hard for me to write in English. I will try to do better next time)
No! It's alright... I can live with it. We have the same problem with the language, I use Tagalog in my native language here in the Philippines.