Subjective expectations - Music

in #music9 years ago (edited)

Music is not properly mixed, but just to give you an idea and to share a bit of me, with you.

Lyrics:
I could've said something tonight
I would've made you all ignite, I know

You cannot own me
Should know by now
You're trying it all the same
Cannot control me
I can't allow
I'm playin' my only game

I could've told you all again, clearly
You would've tried to make me see, your way
I don't why you feel you cannot let go of the image you had of me
You could've seen me all before, know that

You cannot own me
Should know by now
You're trying it all the same
Cannot control me
I can't allow
I'm playin' my only game

Hold on, don't cry, it's not that I'm trying to hurt you
It's all, ok, if you would just know what I'm feeling
I can no longer be living a life that is obviously not what is right for me
So right, so wrong, I am just saying it freely

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Weet je, er zijn nog te veel zangers/zangeressen/groepen die een dure studio nodig hebben om een goede plaat te maken (eigenlijk om hun misbaksels zodanig op te smukken dat het een beetje op een song lijkt)...Jij hebt dat helemaal niet nodig.
We horen nog van jou (letterlijk en figuurlijk)

Dank je! Ja, dit is gewoon opgenomen met een microfoon voor de gitaar en mic voor mn zang en verder is er niets meer gedaan met de opname. En soms is dat dus kennelijk niet zo erg :)) Fijn weekend!

ik heb "follow" geklikt, maar dat blijft alleen maar zo als je beloofd om, af en toe, voor ons (thelionslegion & needersteemers) iets nieuw ten gehore brengt...

I feel the pressure, man... :)

I personally could care less about the mixing. Sometimes an unmixed song is more organic and thus powerful. I really like the composition of the music and how your voice naturally blends with it. Great motivational song. I hope it inspires those constrained by the pressures of outside influences and environments, to practice self-discipline and self-control -- well that's what I got from it. Thanks for sharing!

Thank yóu for your response! That is exactly what I hope people will get out of it. Enjoy your weekend!

I'm not a lyrics reader or listener, but hear the voice as an instrument; Yours sound really nice and even though you think the mixing is not that good, the composition I do like. Nice intonations (with passion) with your voice.

In the end the passion is what makes the music, so I Thank you for that!

Absolutely! Passion is super important.
You are Dutch as well?

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I started to listen to it without having any expectations and wow... you really surprised me with this. You have a really beautiful voice!

Thank you so much! :)

Being an audiophile this is a sexual experience. Eargasm. I like that voice and somehow I am thinking it's your voice. Everything I am going to say next is cheesy. Thank you!

That’s my voice indeed :) Thanks for shutting up just in time #cheesy lol!

Thank you for the great feedback, seriously.

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