An original poem:The little bird wanted to learn a song
The little bird wanted to learn a song
It was wandering across the jungle ,
But none of the jungle made him sure.
It went to cuckoo and made requested
Cuckoo refused it ,The little bird was disappointed.
The little bird wanted to learn a song.
It's strength died but still alive it wish
To become a singer .
Every season came and go,
The little bird wanted to learn a song.
The bird is a representation of a determined person who wants nothing but to achieve his desired goal/dream in life. We all should be like that bird no matter what happens, we should fight for our dream. Good message though.
P.S. Brotherly advice, your poem is great, just be more cautious with the grammatical errors. Good luck in making more poems!!!!
Thanks for your suggestion .
A nice way to teach a lesson to youth. Don't be fed up earlier there is very interesting and successful life ahead. Work hard. :)
Thank you
Nice taught and complemention
Thank u khuro
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