Walls(An Original Poem)

in #life8 years ago

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The walls in my house
stretches to the sky
Digs deeper than the grave
Expands wider in my soul
Electric on the subway tracks
It spills from my bottle
to every corner of the city
I bump into it for freedom music
I jumped a thousand walls to be free
Tradition was too thick
Morality too fake
Religious barbwire even when I prayed
Is it a spiritual wall
that is the real barrier?

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wow! You've got a great poem, a flow of energy within every lines, a mesmerizing words with a rhythm. Great work!

Thanks so much :)

what a unique topic 'walls'

The mason, proud of the wall he had built, could no longer see God.

oh snap I love it. A haiku :)

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