POETRY & ART / Holy
Holy
Steel strings cry,
the baby is cradled.
Once on the highway
a beat,
a runaway truck
a turbulent downgrade.
A covering tarp
is flapping a rhythm
akin to a howl
in a storm
or thunder
parting grey clouds
for a moment of sun
as a bridge
or a passage that leads
to a new phase of life
a place where one ponders
the movement of stars
like a long strand of pearls
ripped from the neck
rolling like tears
or prayers from a rosary.
Great poetry, you seem to be very talented! Thanks for sharing this with us
Your welcome, glad you enjoyed it.
Deep piece- speaks for silence!
Thanks, this is one that just got started without a plan, so I went where it led me.
Deep!
Thanks Billy, so deep even I don't know what it means.
Awww this had such a sad turn :( I didn't realize it was a broken rosary until the final stanza. It's so sad how a person's life could be cut just like, well, a string in one instant. Every bead, every moment, dismantled and disjointed by that tear. You effortlessly captured those sentiments here. Beautiful work!
Thanks, I appreciate your take on it, to be honest it was one of those poems that just started and I followed along to see where it went. I am not even sure I know how to interpret it myself, other than the metaphor of life as a road.
Definitely open to a different number of interpretations. Always a sign of something great!
Ha ha, I can only hope.