POETRY & ART / HolysteemCreated with Sketch.

in #poetry9 years ago

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Holy

Steel strings cry,
the baby is cradled.

Once on the highway
a beat,

a runaway truck
a turbulent downgrade.

A covering tarp
is flapping a rhythm

akin to a howl
in a storm

or thunder
parting grey clouds

for a moment of sun
as a bridge

or a passage that leads
to a new phase of life

a place where one ponders
the movement of stars

like a long strand of pearls
ripped from the neck

rolling like tears
or prayers from a rosary.

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Great poetry, you seem to be very talented! Thanks for sharing this with us

Your welcome, glad you enjoyed it.

Deep piece- speaks for silence!

Thanks, this is one that just got started without a plan, so I went where it led me.

Thanks Billy, so deep even I don't know what it means.

Awww this had such a sad turn :( I didn't realize it was a broken rosary until the final stanza. It's so sad how a person's life could be cut just like, well, a string in one instant. Every bead, every moment, dismantled and disjointed by that tear. You effortlessly captured those sentiments here. Beautiful work!

Thanks, I appreciate your take on it, to be honest it was one of those poems that just started and I followed along to see where it went. I am not even sure I know how to interpret it myself, other than the metaphor of life as a road.

Definitely open to a different number of interpretations. Always a sign of something great!

Ha ha, I can only hope.

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