Your eyes

in #poetry8 years ago (edited)

Free verse, vers libre, verse, which is free from rigid rhymometric composition, occupying a rather wide niche in the European, in particular, English, poetry of the 20th century. This type of versification, which is characterized by the sequential rejection of all the "secondary signs" of verse speech: rhyme, syllable meter, isotony and isosyllabism (equality of strings according to the number of stresses or syllables) and regular strokes.

Your eyes

Your eyes
Your sight
Piercing and clean.
You are looking at me
And like an arrow pierces a target.
Feeling
Like the warm streams of rain
Wash my face.
Eyelash extensions
Like the wings of a bird's wings.
Same light
Weightless and invisible.
I feel your tenderness.

Author: @aurus


Твои глаза

Твои глаза
Твой взгляд
Пронзительный и чистый.
Ты смотришь на меня
И словно стрела пронзает мишень.
Ощущение
Словно теплые струи дождя
Омывают мое лицо.
Взмах ресниц
Словно взмах крыльев птицы.
Такой же легкий
Невесомый и невидимый.
Я чувствую твою нежность.

Автор: @aurus

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your eyes your opinion

Ohhh ... Sorry. Has corrected.

Леша, да ты молодец!

Спасибо, Наташа! :)

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