BEYOND THESE WALLS: Day 2 Entry : 100days Steemit School Poetry Challenge
Beyond the veil, our faces gaze earnestly
Within these walls we stand knowing not what lies beyond the walls
Without the knowledge of what awaits us in the great beyond
We seek to cross these walls which we've seen all our lives
Our lives have been limited by these walls
Our needs have since outgrown these walls
We seek for a land without walls, with more space to run
A land of limitless possibility
There is a world out there full of others like us
A land of immense possibility where the only wall that will exist will be in our minds
The Sea calls us, across the borders of earth
Into the mystery of imaginations
Let the wind bear the tale of our needs to the gods
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We are growing impatient as each day fly by
These walls we will pull down
This barrier we will break at all cost
We are breaking out and nothing can stop us now
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Great piece. I feel this should start an award winning movie
hehehe thank you brother
Great piece. I feel this should start an award winning movie
Good job @aristokratos
This sounds like some ginger anthem you recite before embarking on a protest. It's the kind of time that keeps you going cos you have your gaze on something more.
Thanks a bunch @evashinen, you're amazing!
Nice poetry, i like that i could have a feeling of what you the message you are trying to pass, looking forward to more. Cheers
Thank you very much @mistakili, you will sure love subsequent ones
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