Poem: Into the Supernatural (DAY 4)

in #steemitschoolpoetry6 years ago (edited)

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A mirage into the supernatural with eyes closed to the natural,
Feeling pulled by the midnight air like horizontal gravitation with hissing sounds do you see my goosebumps?
Seeing levitating sorcerers fashioned in hoodies and nike broomsticks,
Flies licking some fluid filled foramen magnum on a plate with expired drumsticks,

So much panting half-way through my diaphragm with sweat droplets sliding from my forehead to my nose and cheeks,
Can I handle this sight any longer than a black man could the Ku Klux Klan or Jesus the Judas’ kiss?

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Cretics of hieroglyphics on tombstones with Archemorus’ bones filled with black roses and parsley,
An upside down supernatural world were roaring zebras and barking cobras are more common than tomalley,

Feeling trapped in this solitary confinement of sin a concentration camp of the spiritually emaciating,
Kissing the feet of Satan with the same lips I gave holy kisses to the church priest,
No hypocrisy intended just double hearts and greed for self aggrandizement,

But what value is self aggrandizement when I’ll soon be locked six feet and moth corrupts the isolated wealth?
The poor craves for greens while the rich will always crave for greater health,
As of me shall I crave the pierced hand that stretches itself across the supernatural abyss and grasps my panting weakness with stealth.
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This is my day 4 poem on the 100 day poetry challenge

I encourage those that have the gift and the interest to join in —> https://steemit.com/steemitschool/@d-pend/announcing-the-steemit-school-poetry-100-day-challenge and lets expand the depth of our poetic abilities and awesome interactions with the vocabs. Hit up with @d-pend for more info

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Macabre. Gripping. Beautifully written.

So right! Much appreciated @nicholas83, and thanks for reading. I hope it wasn’t too scary

I like the poem though it's full of difficult language and may not appeal to a reader of simpler tastes. Then again, you might be appealing to an audience with macabre and dark tastes. Well done.

Hi @theverve, are you a reader of simpler tastes? Thanks a lot for connecting mate, and you’re definitely right. I will however have poems for specific audiences from time to time. It is a good training to be able to write about anything or put yourself in anyone’s shoes, like a goth in this case 😄.

I most definitely am a reader of simpler tastes
I just want something that will feed my imagination, not make me rack my brain. I do enjoy the difficult from time to time but I'm a girl of simple tastes.

And I totally agree. It's a good thing to be able to write for any kind of audience.

Indeed you are I’ve noticed, your latest poem shows it. It made me feel cheated on already. It’s more like my ‘love coach’ poem for day 2. Make more! A simpler one is coming up 😉 lets keep intouch

The world of the supernatural is enigmatic. I like your poem Greetings. Mine refers to the sea.

Greetings buddy, yeah I’ve checked yours out just now. Wonderful word choice! I loved the poem about woman especially, spectacular, I saw my mother in it.

wow! hats off with this piece,I'll be cheering all the way till 100.🎉🎉🎉🎉

Woa I’m glad you enjoyed it @orhem, humbled and incouraged to make more 😁 thanks!

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