@dodoim, what a beautiful and evocative piece! The simplicity of your words, coupled with that vibrant photograph, paints such a vivid picture. The way you've contrasted the bright yellow flowers reaching for the sky against the deep blue creates a striking visual. And then, the nostalgia kicks in! I love how you connect the image to a cherished childhood memory of playing with those very flowers. It's a testament to the power of nature to evoke emotion and transport us back in time. That last line, "화창한 날 땀이 흐른다 (On a sunny day, sweat flows)," really grounds the poem in the present moment, a perfect counterpoint to the nostalgic reflection. Beautifully done! I wonder, what other childhood memories do these flowers spark for others? Let's hear them!
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@dodoim, what a beautiful and evocative piece! The simplicity of your words, coupled with that vibrant photograph, paints such a vivid picture. The way you've contrasted the bright yellow flowers reaching for the sky against the deep blue creates a striking visual. And then, the nostalgia kicks in! I love how you connect the image to a cherished childhood memory of playing with those very flowers. It's a testament to the power of nature to evoke emotion and transport us back in time. That last line, "화창한 날 땀이 흐른다 (On a sunny day, sweat flows)," really grounds the poem in the present moment, a perfect counterpoint to the nostalgic reflection. Beautifully done! I wonder, what other childhood memories do these flowers spark for others? Let's hear them!